Six Word Story #37
“Please… please just leave,” she whispered.
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38 Comments
Jim Borden
wow – this could go in so many directions! well done.
Pete
I guess that’s her objective. We just need to add the cat, umbrella, tall stranger, a rough sea at the promenade and the story grows.
Jim Borden
I didn’t even think about the cat angle! 🙂
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
Keith Haney
You are very talented.
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
Pete
Hehehe came here to escape social media.
PoojaG
Lol we all need a break from social media sometimes!
Pete
🌷
Miss B Blogz Thingz Over..
Have a Nice Day and weekend dear!
PoojaG
Thanks you too!
Miss B Blogz Thingz Over..
ThnQ dear!💋
PoojaG
You’re welcome!
Opher
Atmospheric!
PoojaG
Thank you!
Elaine
Love it, six simple words yet so effective 🥺😢😩
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
seekerloveneet
Thank you to teach something new. And yeah post was awewome 👌👌
PoojaG
Thank you!
scream
Love this as an idea. Will be doing so many so these now!
PoojaG
They are soooo fun to do you’ll really enjoy writing them!
CommonSenseTom
Was it something I said? Didn’t say?
PoojaG
Maybe both?!
CommonSenseTom
It would appear that some more soul searching is in order.
Amazing how her six words can say so much.
PoojaG
Thank you!
lorikiel
Wow
PoojaG
Thanks!
Joel F
Wow, very powerful six word story. Loved it. Thanks for sharing PoojaG
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
Joel F
You’re welcome PoojaG.
Eat 'n' Joy
Absolutely mesmerized by this small yet effective mini story!!
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
Pedro Maycock
Wow, I thought to myself, “you can not tell a story in 6 words.” I am flabbergasted.
Well done!
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
laoc0on
SPOILER: this is my attempt at constructive criticism. Don’t cut me down like a confused zombie at a Redneck Chainsaw Massacre. Maybe I’ll learn something too.
I suppose that was a story. I’m still curious how you can have a full story without a plot and character development. Perhaps this was more of an IDEA for a story, a starter, the kick out of the gate, which sends the imagination somewhere else?
It’s not QUITE as length as, say the Lord of the Rings, but it has a nice flavor to it. Alright, I’ll give it a thumbs up. Nice job 😉
P.S. I couldn’t write LOTR anyways, so who am I kidding?
PoojaG
Haha don’t worry constructive criticism is welcome here!
It’s not really a story and I think most people know that but it’s easier for me to call it a ‘six word story’ rather than call it a ‘six word sentence meant to get your imagination going so that you come up with a story about it in your head’.
Glad you enjoyed it!
thepbkhadka
Beautiful, small yet deep❤️
Great Writing ✨
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PoojaG
Thank you!