I want to give up
I want to let go
I want to drown
Until I can’t breathe anymore
I want to give in
I don’t want to feel like this
I just want to give in
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23 Comments
theanxiouslifeblog
Beautiful and true. I can’t write poetry and truly respect and am in awe of those who can.
PoojaG
Thank you so much! Maybe you should try out poetry because I honestly believe that everyone can write poetry- you just need to be in a certain state of mind I guess 🙂
theanxiouslifeblog
It makes me angry to do like abstract art or playing the piano. My creative outlet is drawing. I appreciate more because it makes me angry to do it I think.
PoojaG
Yeah everyone has their comfort zone I guess that they enjoy and I totally understand that
Buffy Devane
I can very much appreciate this feeling.
Very well expressed.
PoojaG
Thank you so much 🙂
Buffy Devane
You’re most welcome. 🙂
Katrina
Hang in there and remember: everything is temporary.
PoojaG
Thank you so much and that is so true! Nothing is ever permanent 🙂
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kim blades, writer
Please don’t!
PoojaG
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that 🙂
spookynookie
I can really relate to this poem since many times a day I myself think of taking my own life yet chose life instead in spite of the pain.
PoojaG
I think true bravery is being terrified but still choosing to face your problems instead of giving up and taking the easy way out. I’m sure you have your problems as do most of us but we always need to remember that these problems and our life is never permanent. Things change all the time and you never know what’s waiting out there for you 🙂
journeythroughawomansheart
Well written, I hope you don’t harbour such thoughts………………
PoojaG
Thank you so much and no I don’t usually but everyone has their moments and that’s what I wrote this about 🙂
journeythroughawomansheart
I agree …………… Stay Blessed
PoojaG
Thank you and you too 🙂
Jonathan Caswell
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
VERY REAL—SO GLAD SHE DIDN’T! SO GLAD I DID NOT1 🙂
PoojaG
Thank you so much!
Jonathan Caswell
Been there—almost did it,
Learned though, to submit it…
Gotta get to
Another view,
To someone trusted admit it1 –Jonathan Caswell (which you done did!)
PoojaG
Yeah we’ve all been there I guess. Thanks! It feels nice to know other people have been through something similar.
Jonathan Caswell
For me, too. 🙂